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Cry it out,
Cry it out,! Some think that the word "CARE" is something can be proved be asking and asking ... I think that the word " care " is an acrnym for an implied four steps, that are : C contact whom you love... A ask whom you love about how are they doing.... R remember the face of whom you love, and keep it present in your mind.... E end your conversation with whom you love with a smile .... and , under these circumstances, goes my new poem .... Cry it out, ! Cry it all out, man ! it's your bad ! cry it all ! Cry like .....; after all, you'll stand tall No one is to wipe it away, don't you fall ! No champ is in this game. Can't preserve a goal? Sold out, dumped! Yes, you got it all ! So heartless, she is now. Relief your soul No ears she got, accused you; of " no call" Callous, she claimed, and played her like a doll Missed me up, got me waiting, throw the ball Sorry dear, meant not to hurt you… and you'll Forgive me " being too late ". The dice, you roll ! Can't be there in my party; to bridge some hole ! Cause death flied over my house; how to loll? Ask, instead ! for once, Don’t hide them all ! Cry them all, baby, out ! you'll need them all ! For tears are self-treatment; when memories recall Leave me strangled like lovers, Hang me to the wall ! I'll remain white, no digits of yours I got; to call But you, Remember! Don't doubt my love as a whole ! For, I can't show it out; being a love rocky, trying to install ! |
WELL, NIcE WORDS SIS
ITS A WONDERFULL MEANING OF THE WORD cares MY REGARDS.. """""""" |
remember the face of whom you love, and keep it present in your mind
The greatest pain in life, is not to die, but to be forgotten A Seirah thanks alot 4 u topic :vb3::vb3::vb3::vb3: |
اقتباس:
wellcome my sister i agree storgnly with you thanks sweety |
اقتباس:
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[COLOR="Blue"]Thank you Aseerah for the great thinking.. You have a lot of talent.. well- done.
Well, I am not sure if I can comment on the word (baby) or not… baby has another meaning which is lover… So, I think it doesn’t matter to be used here.. (Just my view)0 All the best and keep the good work up [/COLOR] |
Wellcome for your words Amrii agree with you and zabeh ,so i delete this word to be comfortable for
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nice one
keep it up |
thank u dear 4 ur poem
Go ahead |
wellcome al karj and jommanh
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