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اسيرة الامل 08-05-2010 05:53 PM

Cry it out,
 
Cry it out,!





Some think that the word "CARE" is something can be proved be asking and asking ... I think that the word " care " is an acrnym for an implied four steps, that are :


C
contact whom you love...
A
ask whom you love about how are they doing....
R
remember the face of whom you love, and keep it present in your mind....
E
end your conversation with whom you love with a smile ....
and , under these circumstances, goes my new poem ....
Cry it out,

!
Cry it all out, man ! it's your bad ! cry it all !
Cry like .....; after all, you'll stand tall
No one is to wipe it away, don't you fall !
No champ is in this game. Can't preserve a goal?
Sold out, dumped! Yes, you got it all !
So heartless, she is now. Relief your soul
No ears she got, accused you; of " no call"
Callous, she claimed, and played her like a doll
Missed me up, got me waiting, throw the ball
Sorry dear, meant not to hurt you… and you'll
Forgive me " being too late ". The dice, you roll !
Can't be there in my party; to bridge some hole !
Cause death flied over my house; how to loll?
Ask, instead ! for once, Don’t hide them all !
Cry them all, baby, out ! you'll need them all !
For tears are self-treatment; when memories recall
Leave me strangled like lovers, Hang me to the wall !
I'll remain white, no digits of yours I got; to call
But you, Remember! Don't doubt my love as a whole !
For, I can't show it out; being a love rocky, trying to install !

ظبي الرواشد 08-06-2010 05:24 AM

WELL, NIcE WORDS SIS

ITS A WONDERFULL MEANING OF THE WORD cares


MY REGARDS..


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@متميز@ 08-06-2010 02:52 PM

remember the face of whom you love, and keep it present in your mind
The greatest pain in life, is not to die, but to be forgotten
A Seirah thanks alot 4 u topic

:vb3::vb3::vb3::vb3:

اسيرة الامل 08-06-2010 03:32 PM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ظبي الرواشد (المشاركة 801296)
WELL, NIcE WORDS SIS

ITS A WONDERFULL MEANING OF THE WORD CARE

BUT I THINK THE WORD{{ BABY}} IS NOT SUITABLE FOR THE TOPIC

MY REGARDS..


""""""""


wellcome my sister
i agree storgnly with you
thanks sweety

اسيرة الامل 08-06-2010 03:40 PM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة @متميز@ (المشاركة 801386)
remember the face of whom you love, and keep it present in your mind
The greatest pain in life, is not to die, but to be forgotten
A Seirah thanks alot 4 u topic

:vb3::vb3::vb3::vb3:

wellcome motmez
redface.

Amri Cool 08-25-2010 12:35 PM

[COLOR="Blue"]Thank you Aseerah for the great thinking.. You have a lot of talent.. well- done.

Well, I am not sure if I can comment on the word (baby) or not… baby has another meaning which is lover… So, I think it doesn’t matter to be used here.. (Just my view)0

All the best and keep the good work up [/
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اسيرة الامل 08-25-2010 12:54 PM

Wellcome for your words Amrii agree with you and zabeh ,so i delete this word to be comfortable for
u

الخـــــارج عن القانـــون 08-25-2010 11:31 PM

nice one

keep it up

جمانة 09-07-2010 12:12 AM

thank u dear 4 ur poem

Go ahead

اسيرة الامل 09-12-2010 02:40 PM

wellcome al karj and jommanh


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